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		<title>Confused Words</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Jun 2010 04:13:27 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>M.R. Anglin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[The English language is filled with words that sound the same but are completely different. Worse yet, many of them aren&#8217;t picked up by a computer&#8217;s grammar or spell checker. The result can be devastating. For example, I tried to submit a piece for a professional to review, and he refused, citing (among other things) [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The English language is filled with words that sound the same but are completely different. Worse yet, many of them aren&#8217;t picked up by a computer&#8217;s grammar or spell checker. The result can be devastating.</p>
<p>For example, I tried to submit a piece for a professional to review, and he refused, citing (among other things) the fact that I mistook the word &#8220;devise&#8221; for &#8220;device&#8221; in every instance in my story. It made me look amateurish and stupid.</p>
<p>So, in an attempt to prevent this from happening to others, here are a list of common words that sound the same and/or are confused several times. God willing, I will be adding more as I think of them.</p>
<p>Disclaimer: This list is neither exhaustive nor in alphabetical order. The definitions of the words are also not exhaustive. I just added the most common, in my opinion, definitions for the words. I tried to keep the definitions and sample sentences original to me, but in some cases I had help from the MS Word Encarta dictionary.</p>
<p>Your- n. A possessive noun that indicates something belongs to “you”<br />
Your ball is over there; this is mine.</p>
<p>You’re-a contraction; You are<br />
You’re not allowed to be here.</p>
<p>There- n. a place that is not here<br />
The building you are looking for is over there.</p>
<p>Their- n. A possessive noun that indicates something belongs to “them”<br />
Their house is pink and white.</p>
<p>They’re- a contraction; They are<br />
They’re coming down the street now.</p>
<p>Site- n. a place where something is; a special or important place<br />
Rocks and debris covered the building site.<br />
The accident occurred on this site. </p>
<p>Cite- v. to quote<br />
He cited Plato in his thesis.</p>
<p>Advise- v. to give advice<br />
He advised me to go to Hawaii on vacation.</p>
<p>Advice- n. someone’s opinion on an action<br />
He gave me some advice on where to go on vacation.</p>
<p>Devise- v. to scheme; to make up something<br />
He devised a plan to break his brother out of jail.</p>
<p>Device- n. a machine<br />
That device can turn gold into sand.</p>
<p>Peak- n. the top of something, such as a mountain<br />
He climbed to the mountain’s peak.</p>
<p>Peek- v. to look secretly or quickly<br />
He peeked into his parents’ bedroom as they argued.<br />
n. &#8220;a quick or secret look&#8221; &#8211;MS Word dictionary<br />
He took a peek at his presents before his parents could wrap them.</p>
<p>Pique- v. to incite interest<br />
The strange device piqued Charles’ interest.</p>
<p>Toward/towards- mean the same thing. Toward is used in American English; towards is used in British English; same with afterward/afterwards </p>
<p>Past- prep. belonging to a former time or further than a place<br />
Scrooge saw the ghost of Christmas past.<br />
The building you want is past Main Street.</p>
<p>Passed- v. past tense of pass<br />
That driver passed me and cut me off.</p>
<p>Lay- v. to put or place<br />
Tenses: lay, laid, laid<br />
He walked in to lay the child down.<br />
He laid the blanket on the floor. </p>
<p>Lie- v. to recline or rest<br />
Tenses: lie, lay, lain<br />
“Lie down and be still,” his mother said.<br />
He lay down and rested.<br />
That thing has lain there for ages.</p>
<p>Lie- n. the opposite of the truth; also the v. to tell the opposite of the truth<br />
He lied under oath.<br />
A little, white lie is still a lie. </p>
<p>Regimen- n. a program, often to lose weight<br />
She went on a weight loss regimen.</p>
<p>Regiment- n. a group of soldiers or people.<br />
The entire regiment of troops was deployed.</p>
<p>Conscious- v. to be aware<br />
He was hit hard but is still conscious.<br />
Antonym- unconscious</p>
<p>Conscience- n. the part inside of a person that helps him to distinguish right from wrong<br />
His conscience bothered him so much that he had to tell the truth.</p>
<p>Capital- n. the city where the government sits<br />
The capital of the United States is Washington DC.</p>
<p>Capitol- n. the building where the government sits<br />
The US Congress meets in the Capitol building.</p>
<p>Than- conj. A word that is used to compare something to something else<br />
He is bigger than Jack.</p>
<p>Then- adv. Belonging to a specific time or indicating the order of something<br />
I was younger and wilder back then, but I am prettier now.<br />
In order to cook soup, first boil the water then put in the meat and vegetables.</p>
<p>Two- n. a number denoting more than one but less than three<br />
There are two boys in the yard.</p>
<p>Too- adv. In addition to<br />
I want to go too.</p>
<p>To- prep. Indicates several things, including direction, purpose, range, as well as creating an indicative<br />
I want to go to school.<br />
He covered everything from math to quantum physics in his speech.<br />
I am going to learn something.</p>
<p>Backward and backwards mean the same. Backward is only to be used as an adjective. Both backward or backward can be used as an adverb.</p>
<p>Presence- n. to be somewhere<br />
Your presence is requested at the wedding of John and Mary.</p>
<p>Presents- n. plural of present, meaning a gift<br />
He received more than twenty presents for Christmas.</p>
<p>Its- n. a possessive pronoun indicating that something belongs to “it”<br />
The dog was so cute, and its collar was red and shiny.</p>
<p>It’s- contraction. It is<br />
It’s not that difficult to change a tire.</p>
<p>If you have any suggestions on more words, feel free to add them in.</p>
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		<title>Confidence</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 26 May 2010 02:58:10 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>M.R. Anglin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Why is it so hard to have confidence in your writing? We, as writers, have to think and speak confidence in ourselves . . . and believe it or we&#8217;ll believe any old thing that Satan puts in our heads!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Why is it so hard to have confidence in your writing? We, as writers, have to think and speak confidence in ourselves . . . and believe it or we&#8217;ll believe any old thing that Satan puts in our heads!</p>
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		<title>Write it Down! Or Don&#8217;t</title>
		<link>http://www.lyeland.com/myblog/?p=255</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 20 May 2010 04:10:17 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>M.R. Anglin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Isn&#8217;t it horrible when you think up a brilliant piece of dialogue or scene and then have it disappear before you can use it in a story? Try to write down those pieces of brilliance as soon as you can if doing so will help you preserve it. For some, writing it down can kill [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Isn&#8217;t it horrible when you think up a brilliant piece of dialogue or scene and then have it disappear before you can use it in a story?  Try to write down those pieces of brilliance as soon as you can if doing so will help you preserve it.  For some, writing it down can kill the brilliance.  It just depends on the kind of writer you are.</p>
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		<title>Grammar and Your Writing</title>
		<link>http://www.lyeland.com/myblog/?p=253</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 17 May 2010 23:39:37 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>M.R. Anglin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Grammar is not your enemy. It helps people understand what you have to say. If you don&#8217;t follow proper grammar, people get can get confused and not understand what you are trying to say. Besides, it&#8217;s fun to break those grammar rules to make a point. If you follow proper grammar for most of your [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Grammar is not your enemy. It helps people understand what you have to say. If you don&#8217;t follow proper grammar, people get can get confused and not understand what you are trying to say. Besides, it&#8217;s fun to break those grammar rules to make a point. If you follow proper grammar for most of your story and break a rule on purpose, then people are more likely to get your point and think you&#8217;re brilliant</p>
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		<title>Emotion in Text</title>
		<link>http://www.lyeland.com/myblog/?p=251</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 13 May 2010 04:40:15 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>M.R. Anglin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Today as I was writing a sad scene, I started to cry. It reminded me of how I write emotionally charged scenes at times. Sometimes when I write I will stomp up and down and yell the dialogue (not too loud though) or pace as I speak the words my characters say. So, if stomping [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Today as I was writing a sad scene, I started to cry. It reminded me of how I write emotionally charged scenes at times. Sometimes when I write I will stomp up and down and yell the dialogue (not too loud though) or pace as I speak the words my characters say. So, if stomping up and down your house helps you translate emotion into your text, go for it! Just be prepared to explain it to people who pass by. =)</p>
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		<title>Moving Forward</title>
		<link>http://www.lyeland.com/myblog/?p=250</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 12 May 2010 00:56:39 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>M.R. Anglin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[In order to keep myself moving forward and getting my story done, I give myself a quota for the day. Right now, I try to type up five chapters a day (Sunday through Friday). Usually, I only write one chapter, but this story is so long that I feel as if would get discouraged if [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In order to keep myself moving forward and getting my story done, I give myself a quota for the day. Right now, I try to type up five chapters a day (Sunday through Friday). Usually, I only write one chapter, but this story is so long that I feel as if would get discouraged if i didn&#8217;t move quicker.</p>
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		<title>Hello?</title>
		<link>http://www.lyeland.com/myblog/?p=248</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 05 May 2010 23:28:11 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>M.R. Anglin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Whoo! I haven&#8217;t updated this in a while. I just started a facebook page for my writing. So if you want to follow me there, that will be great. I think I will try to upload what I write there, here as well . . . just to keep it updated. Don&#8217;t hold me to [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Whoo!  I haven&#8217;t updated this in a while.  I just started a facebook page for my writing.  So if you want to follow me there, that will be great.  I think I will try to upload what I write there, here as well . . . just to keep it updated.  Don&#8217;t hold me to that, though. =)</p>
<p>Today&#8217;s Facebook post:</p>
<p>When I&#8217;ve got a massive story to do, having mini-goals is key. For instance, in this massive story I&#8217;ve undertaken, I separated it into parts. Now I can say that I&#8217;ve done 2 out of 5 parts and feel like I&#8217;m getting somewhere.</p>
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		<title>January</title>
		<link>http://www.lyeland.com/myblog/?p=245</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 09 Jan 2010 02:57:26 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>M.R. Anglin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[So, today I will discuss how to be a good critic. After that, I will probably not be writing any tips for the rest of the month because I&#8217;ve run out of ideas! I do, however, plan to sit my butt down and write critiques of all the pieces in the gallery of my writing [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So, today I will discuss how to be a good critic. After that, I will probably not be writing any tips for the rest of the month because I&#8217;ve run out of ideas! I do, however, plan to sit my butt down and write critiques of all the pieces in the gallery of my writing club that I haven&#8217;t critiqued before . . . God willing.<br />
But on to the tip.</p>
<p>&#8220;Becoming a better writer means becoming a better reader.&#8221; This was the lesson taught to me by my first writing instructor in college. I believe it is the same professor who taught us a brilliant critiquing template that I have held onto for all these years.</p>
<p>If you have read the critiquing guidelines (as all members should have), then you will have seen this strategy before. First, say something nice about the piece. Find something good to say. There has to be something. Many times when I read a piece, the only good thing that I can say about it is that it has wonderful imagination. I can get through the worst of writing if only it has good imagination. Other times, the plot is good. Either way, there&#8217;s got to be something. The author needs to know what they are doing right as well as what they are doing wrong.</p>
<p>Next, state the bad things, but only do it in the spirit of helping the person. State what&#8217;s wrong, but also state a solution. For instance, if the piece is too long and wordy, tell the author that the piece is long and wordy, but don’t stop there. Suggest what sections needs to be cut and why you think so. Not only is this helping the author make the piece better, but it is also helping you. By thinking about how to make another&#8217;s work better, you are tuning your writing muscles so you can see the faults in your piece.</p>
<p>Afterward, state something else nice about the piece. Just find something else nice to say. It is possible to say at least two things nice about a piece. If you can&#8217;t find at least 2 nice things to say, consider not saying anything.</p>
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		<title>December Writing Tip On Hold</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Dec 2009 02:58:25 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>M.R. Anglin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Sorry, I ended up writing about the changes made to my club on deviantart. The next tip will possibly be the second Friday in Jan. I will be going on vacation. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sorry, I ended up writing about the changes made to my club on deviantart.  The next tip will possibly be the second Friday in Jan.  I will be going on vacation.  Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!</p>
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		<title>Blamphemous?</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Dec 2009 19:06:09 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>M.R. Anglin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[http://www.usatoday.com/news/nation/census/2009-12-14-xmas_N.htm?se=yahoorefer Somehow, I don&#8217;t think the poster is that offensive. To me, they&#8217;re not saying anything wrong&#8211;that is what happened. Mary and Jospeh did go to Bethlehem because of a census. Do I think the poster is inappropriate? Yeah . . . but it has nothing to do with Mary and Jospeh. My issue is [...]]]></description>
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<p>Somehow, I don&#8217;t think the poster is that offensive.  To me, they&#8217;re not saying anything wrong&#8211;that is what happened.  Mary and Jospeh did go to Bethlehem because of a census.  Do I think the poster is inappropriate? Yeah . . . but it has nothing to do with Mary and Jospeh.  My issue is more because it&#8217;s targeting illegal immigrants, and I have my own opinions on that. </p>
<p>So, what&#8217;s your opinion.  Do you think it&#8217;s blasphemous and why or why not?</p>
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